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(Contains: nudity, sexual themes, violence/gore, strong language and ideologically sensitive material)
Ashley continues her training under Mistress Jocasta.
as before ashinperil has supplied her wonderful artwork and dannysuling has done his magical editing
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Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
oo la la! :)  Are you trying to make me crazy?!
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
Thanks for reading the whole series. I think you hold the current record for the most stories read in the shortest time!
If your still interested another chapter will go up in a week or so
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
can't wait :)
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
I'm flattered. thanks!

was there a particular chapter you liked the most?
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
I'm kind of torn between 3 and 5 :D
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
I had fun writing the Japanese business man section in chapter 3. I liked how chapter 5 turned although it wound up a little longer than i hoped.
Did it seem long to you or not too bad?

Glad you enjoyed them!
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
It was fine, the amount of text was necessary to create the imagery and mood you were attempting to convey.
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Well yes.... isn't that the whole idea of erotic fiction :)
I'm glad that you seem to be enjoying the story. i hope you continue with it.
and thanks for commenting!
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
I read it all, now I imagine being sold as a California blonde, to some Nigerian businessman! :P
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
I'll see what I can arrange :)
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Gee thanks! :P
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:iconjarvik2009:
jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
He wants to know the shipping charges .... what part of Canada are you from :)  
oh and he doesn't get hockey on TV so no complaining
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Hey if he's one of those Nigerian oil multimillionaires he can afford a first class ticket and satellite! :P
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
I get a nice commission check, you get a nicely padded crate and cyber training. He'll give in the Sat dish but only 2 hours of hockey a week and you can watch the Olympics but you have to dress up as a speed skater while watching.  :)
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XavierSt Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Well, only after having submitted my short comment, I read that of yellowplasma. Yeah, he's right! As some proverb says: don't shoot at first sight or so. Better to read other comments first, but then, first thought, swiftly written down, that's it!
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XavierSt Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Exciting story so far. Thank you very much. I've been curiously waiting for the next part...
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Pepsidiso Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
I need more!  Please? *whimpers*
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sabinaBondage Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
Very intense and very sexy!
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yellowplasma Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A fascinating, articulate and thoughtful tale of sexual domination and submission!  The humanity of the inhumanity resonated on such a primal level!  Dominates make the best submissives because only  the dominates bear the fruitless burden of pride.  Mistress Jocasta conquers her women with a carefully brutal foreplay that renders them genuinely loyal and obedient.  Her victims are SLAVES indeed, both inside and out!  It all flowed perfectly.  It all made sense.  The ending satisfied, in every way.  I like that you told the story in third person, so that we could hear the REAL story rather than a skewed perspective.  It was a wonderful paradox how you were able to tell this impartial tale from the perspective of Ashley-Slave 1016, who becomes us.  We experience the sexual-psychological conditioning.  By the end, we yearn to submit rather than escape.  Well done.    
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coguci Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Also love the story a lot. Hope for some pictures some day :)
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LunaBondageDoll Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
well that was... *pretends not to be wet as hell* Er... Yeah... *re-reads about 30 more times*
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
I love your responses ! People like you are what keep me writing!

Thanks for following the story!
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