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oo la la! Are you trying to make me crazy?!
Thanks for reading the whole series. I think you hold the current record for the most stories read in the shortest time!
If your still interested another chapter will go up in a week or so
I'm flattered. thanks!
was there a particular chapter you liked the most?
I'm kind of torn between 3 and 5
I had fun writing the Japanese business man section in chapter 3. I liked how chapter 5 turned although it wound up a little longer than i hoped.
Did it seem long to you or not too bad?
Glad you enjoyed them!
Well yes.... isn't that the whole idea of erotic fiction
I'm glad that you seem to be enjoying the story. i hope you continue with it.
and thanks for commenting!
I read it all, now I imagine being sold as a California blonde, to some Nigerian businessman!
I'll see what I can arrange
He wants to know the shipping charges .... what part of Canada are you from
oh and he doesn't get hockey on TV so no complaining
Hey if he's one of those Nigerian oil multimillionaires he can afford a first class ticket and satellite!
Well, only after having submitted my short comment, I read that of yellowplasma. Yeah, he's right! As some proverb says: don't shoot at first sight or so. Better to read other comments first, but then, first thought, swiftly written down, that's it!
Exciting story so far. Thank you very much. I've been curiously waiting for the next part...
I need more! Please? *whimpers*
Very intense and very sexy!
A fascinating, articulate and thoughtful tale of sexual domination and submission! The humanity of the inhumanity resonated on such a primal level! Dominates make the best submissives because only the dominates bear the fruitless burden of pride. Mistress Jocasta conquers her women with a carefully brutal foreplay that renders them genuinely loyal and obedient. Her victims are SLAVES indeed, both inside and out! It all flowed perfectly. It all made sense. The ending satisfied, in every way. I like that you told the story in third person, so that we could hear the REAL story rather than a skewed perspective. It was a wonderful paradox how you were able to tell this impartial tale from the perspective of Ashley-Slave 1016, who becomes us. We experience the sexual-psychological conditioning. By the end, we yearn to submit rather than escape. Well done.
Also love the story a lot. Hope for some pictures some day
well that was... *pretends not to be wet as hell* Er... Yeah... *re-reads about 30 more times*