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(Contains: nudity, sexual themes, violence/gore, strong language and ideologically sensitive material)
Ashley continues her training under Mistress Jocasta.
as before ashinperil has supplied her wonderful artwork and dannysuling has done his magical editing
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Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
oo la la! :)  Are you trying to make me crazy?!
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
Thanks for reading the whole series. I think you hold the current record for the most stories read in the shortest time!
If your still interested another chapter will go up in a week or so
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
can't wait :)
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:iconjarvik2009:
jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
I'm flattered. thanks!

was there a particular chapter you liked the most?
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
I'm kind of torn between 3 and 5 :D
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
I had fun writing the Japanese business man section in chapter 3. I liked how chapter 5 turned although it wound up a little longer than i hoped.
Did it seem long to you or not too bad?

Glad you enjoyed them!
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
It was fine, the amount of text was necessary to create the imagery and mood you were attempting to convey.
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jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Well yes.... isn't that the whole idea of erotic fiction :)
I'm glad that you seem to be enjoying the story. i hope you continue with it.
and thanks for commenting!
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:icongreeneyes80a:
Greeneyes80a Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
I read it all, now I imagine being sold as a California blonde, to some Nigerian businessman! :P
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:iconjarvik2009:
jarvik2009 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
I'll see what I can arrange :)
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